I’ve unknowingly been keeping up with this artist’s stuff on e621 and I gotta say the stuff they make always hits a spot in me that I don’t have words for and this vn is no different thanks horrorbuns
So, I don't often leave a comment, but this game caught me so much by surprise I have to lol.
I saw this game in my itch a few times, and looked over it a couple times, but didn't seem super interesting, so I moved on. Finally downloaded it, and finished the entire thing in one sitting. My gosh I loved this, the art style, the writing, the only kink I missed out on in this would have been Eli giving a blowjob to Tremor. The only sad thing about this for me was how short it was, but I know 100% I'll be following Horrorbuns in whatever they do next, I can't wait.
Edit: Somehow got the impression that the VN was done, just realized the update from 40 days ago (at the time of writing this), mentions more to come, so I'm freaking hyped, looking forward to it!
I would love to see how this universe pans out, either in terms of more side stories, or a longer story about Eli and Tre. Does Eli ever win? Do they “wrestle” other wrestlers? Are there tag-team matches? Does Tremor ever reach mainstream fame? There are thousands of ways you can take this.
And how will Tremor react when Eli has to wrestle and get pounded by other Wrestler, will he get jealous?
And what happen if two Tops/Stars clash? Will Eli love for Tremor falter or be shaken if Tremor gets pounded by the Champion or someone else? Who does Tremor or other Superstars coop with loosing from time to time?
I know this project was meant to be short, but I would have loved a slower narration, where perhaps instead of accepting the proposal they concentrate on the bitterness of a relationship between the arduous vicissitudes of life. A flying thought, I still really appreciated your work. A lot. Anyway Tremor bottom please, I need it hahaha. Bye!
Can't say for certain, you're the first person to report something like this. If you have one installed, check to see if your anti-virus software is flagging the exe.
sadly i still couldn't install it on my pc but it seemed to work on my phone so i got to play it. It was amazing hope you make more in the future i love the art.
Great art and writing. I liked how the characters were shown through the story, tho I wished I could've seen more of their relationship. The horny scenes were good too, but I guess it's not my thing lol
Ngl this was perfect,I don't know if u plan to continue with this or if it's a short story but to me this was really well done and I just love how, although it's short, still is really sweet and extremely horny, the perfect balance lol I just wish we could see more of their relationship before the last fight when they got together and if this was suppose to just be a short story I would love if u made a longer vn with this theme, it could be like the mc going to start in this fight/porn business and you could fight with different characters and choose different routes depending on who u fight against or something like this.
Is it possible to create a 32-bit version of the exe? I'm stuck on old hardware for now and can't open the game because of it. I think Renpy should allow for this.
Unfortunately, I don't think I'll be able to do that at the moment, as the script currently uses a lot of features of later versions of Renpy. I'll see about creating another version in the future, but it'll be a bit of work to get that out.
Well I'm surprised how I'm good the game turned out to be and I love all of it even the spicy things and then you blush hers then I was surprised the detail 💖😛😋😍🥰👏👏 the chief of the good work and take your time
Ah dang, sorry I'm not the best at trouble shooting this sort of issue, as I don't have an android device to test on. If uninstalling it and reinstalling doesn't help, I'll look into possible solutions when I have the chance.
If you have a moment, please uninstall the existing version of the app and try downloading the most recent version. This one hopefully should work out. If not I'll do some further investigation.
I ABSOLUTELY love the dumb cocky hunk Tremor as I am wanting to learn more about him and his past. (This vn helped cement the desires Elijah wants is into is not so far from my own hahaha)
Wrestling is a top tier kink so it was glad a vn exploring that came along. Excellent art, and the overarching plot works for what it is. The writing for a few of the character moments felt clumsy and pulled me out of the fantasy a bit, but otherwise I greatly enjoyed it!
Finally, I can play a vn that has a wrestling theme (I think this is the first time there is a vn like this)
In my opinion, it need a deeper character introduction. So, the reader can be more sympathetic or something like that to the main or side character.
I know, this is the first version, and there will be many improvements in the future. I hope the upcoming story will be better than the current version (not that the current version is bad).
By the way, great job!! I really like this vn. I can't wait for the next update!! XD
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Does anyone know when is the next update?
When it's done.
Nice
The story has reached the end
No, it hasn't
I love the story and art. I wish it was longer.
I could die happy if tremors were to sit on my face and fart ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
This was short but really good.. tremors hot.
not gon lie i'd love a full live service like updated game with like patreon for updates and stuff
I both love this story much and almost hate how short it was but damn if what I got didn't make nut
elijah is the embodiment of "don't bully me, I'll cum" >:3
are any routes done
based
This was so satisfying to read. And it somehow felt proper and loved.
This is soooo good
No kidding this is so good.
Does anyone know when is this getting an update
Great VN.
I’ve unknowingly been keeping up with this artist’s stuff on e621 and I gotta say the stuff they make always hits a spot in me that I don’t have words for and this vn is no different thanks horrorbuns
Oh you better check their twitter ;-)
I did right after posting this and I gotta say not disappointed
It's pretty much the opposite of what I'm into (other than being gay), but it was still a fun read and deserving of a good rating.
I'm absolutely loving this; the stink-face scene was glorious!
Please tell me you have big plans for that Fang hunk!
Oh yeah! I hope so!
So, I don't often leave a comment, but this game caught me so much by surprise I have to lol.
I saw this game in my itch a few times, and looked over it a couple times, but didn't seem super interesting, so I moved on. Finally downloaded it, and finished the entire thing in one sitting. My gosh I loved this, the art style, the writing, the only kink I missed out on in this would have been Eli giving a blowjob to Tremor. The only sad thing about this for me was how short it was, but I know 100% I'll be following Horrorbuns in whatever they do next, I can't wait.
Edit: Somehow got the impression that the VN was done, just realized the update from 40 days ago (at the time of writing this), mentions more to come, so I'm freaking hyped, looking forward to it!
will we get to make choices? and is tre the only 'interest'?
As of right now, the story is linear. Future story stories will likely be more dynamic.
I would love to see how this universe pans out, either in terms of more side stories, or a longer story about Eli and Tre. Does Eli ever win? Do they “wrestle” other wrestlers? Are there tag-team matches? Does Tremor ever reach mainstream fame? There are thousands of ways you can take this.
And how will Tremor react when Eli has to wrestle and get pounded by other Wrestler, will he get jealous?
And what happen if two Tops/Stars clash? Will Eli love for Tremor falter or be shaken if Tremor gets pounded by the Champion or someone else? Who does Tremor or other Superstars coop with loosing from time to time?
Yeah, I just read it and was wondering some of that stuff... The drama! I hope they have to face Fang at some point. I can't wait!
I. . . uh. . . I......
You have rendered me absolutely speechless. The amount of jealousy coursing through my veins right now, I swear.
Does anyone know when is the next update coming out
Yes. Now
I know this project was meant to be short, but I would have loved a slower narration, where perhaps instead of accepting the proposal they concentrate on the bitterness of a relationship between the arduous vicissitudes of life. A flying thought, I still really appreciated your work. A lot. Anyway Tremor bottom please, I need it hahaha. Bye!
It's a linear romance and romantic and sexual relationships will only be with this 500-pound thorn in the side?
I would encourage you to read the story if you’re curious about what happens.
Eh, intrigued
I love It It Help Me Get My Mine Have A Bad A Day
Did it get updated today?
Sorry for the false alarm there! Just had to reupload the files with a few changes.
I see, It's alright! I am just excited to see more of this visual novel.
Can't wait for this game to get updates!!!
why is it that when i try and download the pc ver it keeps getting removed is it corrupted or smth?
Can't say for certain, you're the first person to report something like this. If you have one installed, check to see if your anti-virus software is flagging the exe.
sadly i still couldn't install it on my pc but it seemed to work on my phone so i got to play it. It was amazing hope you make more in the future i love the art.
Ah dang, sorry that the desktop version keeps giving you trouble, not sure what the cause could be. Glad you were able to check it out though!
Has great potential. Keep it up!
This game is awesome. I can't wait to see what else is going to happen
Great art and writing. I liked how the characters were shown through the story, tho I wished I could've seen more of their relationship. The horny scenes were good too, but I guess it's not my thing lol
Either way, good job!
Ngl this was perfect,I don't know if u plan to continue with this or if it's a short story but to me this was really well done and I just love how, although it's short, still is really sweet and extremely horny, the perfect balance lol I just wish we could see more of their relationship before the last fight when they got together and if this was suppose to just be a short story I would love if u made a longer vn with this theme, it could be like the mc going to start in this fight/porn business and you could fight with different characters and choose different routes depending on who u fight against or something like this.
Is it possible to create a 32-bit version of the exe? I'm stuck on old hardware for now and can't open the game because of it.
I think Renpy should allow for this.
Unfortunately, I don't think I'll be able to do that at the moment, as the script currently uses a lot of features of later versions of Renpy. I'll see about creating another version in the future, but it'll be a bit of work to get that out.
Well I'm surprised how I'm good the game turned out to be and I love all of it even the spicy things and then you blush hers then I was surprised the detail 💖😛😋😍🥰👏👏 the chief of the good work and take your time
I NEED MORE
You did sucha good job Horrorbuns! Love it <3!
On Android it says app is not installed :<
Ah dang, sorry I'm not the best at trouble shooting this sort of issue, as I don't have an android device to test on. If uninstalling it and reinstalling doesn't help, I'll look into possible solutions when I have the chance.
Maybe it's the architecture of your android, can you if your android is 32 bits or 64 bits?
thank you take your time sir
If you have a moment, please uninstall the existing version of the app and try downloading the most recent version. This one hopefully should work out. If not I'll do some further investigation.
thank you and there's no trouble installing the app and again thanks
I ABSOLUTELY love the dumb cocky hunk Tremor as I am wanting to learn more about him and his past. (This vn helped cement the desires Elijah wants is into is not so far from my own hahaha)
Wrestling is a top tier kink so it was glad a vn exploring that came along. Excellent art, and the overarching plot works for what it is. The writing for a few of the character moments felt clumsy and pulled me out of the fantasy a bit, but otherwise I greatly enjoyed it!
I underestimated just how horny a vn can be. Can'r wait for the second update.
Finally, I can play a vn that has a wrestling theme (I think this is the first time there is a vn like this)
In my opinion, it need a deeper character introduction. So, the reader can be more sympathetic or something like that to the main or side character.
I know, this is the first version, and there will be many improvements in the future. I hope the upcoming story will be better than the current version (not that the current version is bad).
By the way, great job!! I really like this vn. I can't wait for the next update!! XD